Bibliography
https://www.hollywoodintoto.com/cassie-petrey-crowd-surf-interview/
http://content.time.com/time/arts/article/0,8599,2009789,00.html
https://www.theguardian.com/film/2016/jan/06/patricia-neal-interview-roald-dahl-1971
Mom
Dad
Family Tree on Mom's Side
Letter on Dad's Side From 1924
I enjoyed reading this timeline, as it is a very different format than what we typically use. Personally, I haven't created an online timeline for a project. This is a very creative and interesting project. I did notice a couple of areas for improvement, however.
First of all, I would recommend creating a smaller scale. I just had to scroll through large periods of time where there were no events. It would be easier if you didn't have to keep on scrolling and scrolling to see each piece of information. However, I do realize that this might not be possible to do on this website (TimeGraphics), so don't worry too much about this. I also realize that I can zoom out, but when I do, I miss all of the events on your timeline and scroll either too far into the future or too far into the past.
Another thing that I noticed while viewing your project is that some of the sentences don't flow and/or make sense. I would just recommend having someone else proofread to catch all of the little mistakes. I understand that some things are easy to miss when you're writing.
All in all, I think you did a good job on your project. Thank you for introducing me to TimeGraphics! I will definitely look into using this website in the future.
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